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Haha am taking a beating here
Thats it am leaving.
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Posted: 2008-01-25 13:56:56
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Muhammad-Oli Posts: > 500
Cycovision yeah, he seems to rhyme with ease,
But really making those rhymes must be a breeze.
Just stick some words together on the same line, then,
Put down some more words making sure they rhyme, and,
Hopefully someone will think it sounds cool, but,
This guy sounds like he's straight outta Ice T's rap school!
See, when you write rhymes they gotta make sense,
Otherwise your sh*t gets slammed up against a fence!
Oh!
EDIT: Spelling.
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[ This Message was edited by: Muhummad-Oli on 2008-01-25 13:18 ]
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Posted: 2008-01-25 14:17:20
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Clashing with Oli? "oh gee man, I'm sorry" but winning this battle is like taking a lolly
from a kid; cos you see that his rhymes are just folly
it's raining outside side, hey mom, where's my brolly?
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Posted: 2008-01-25 14:39:05
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Yo Yo Yo his name is cycovision
It's him that I am dissin'
He's always on a mission
To dress in ladies fashion (shoehorn time!)
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Posted: 2008-01-25 14:42:03
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Fashion? I dress with a passion but ration my verse,
to fit in my bag with my new gucci purse
but yo, this guy meths he just lets it all out
in a shout, wriggles his bum and goes making a pout
lettin you know that he's ready for you,
to go to the bar and buy his special brew
[ This Message was edited by: Cycovision on 2008-01-25 13:53 ]
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Posted: 2008-01-25 14:52:45
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Muhammad-Oli Posts: > 500
Methylated Spirit,
You can tell he isn't with it.
On his ass is where I'll pin it, coz,
Anyone can see,
Hes just a donkey,
Droning around like fatevdestiny.
Yeah he rhymes even worse than Cyco,
Couldn't even get to places I go,
With my rhymes coz they're so much better,
Carry this on and your faces will only get redder.
Break it down now!
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[ This Message was edited by: Muhummad-Oli on 2008-01-25 13:59 ]
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Posted: 2008-01-25 14:56:02
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Muhammad_Oli,
Oh my dayz,
you are a cheap immitation,
watch out for the sting,
im quick and you know it,
so watch out for me,
im Mosdelln
Watch out................Im the Bee!!!
......abit weak i know
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[ This Message was edited by: mosdelln on 2008-01-26 14:30 ]
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Posted: 2008-01-25 15:47:05
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mosdelln that hardly rhyme
u should realy take your time
maybe then it'll be as good as mine
my lyrics ar are class
you should consider givein rapin a pass
otherwise youll be kissin my ass
lol just a bit of fun wb
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Posted: 2008-01-27 18:03:39
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So this guy nocky be coming out cocky,
banging out rhymes, ill give you two times.
you wont beat me, i'm the esato G!
lyrically smooth, check out these lines!
So sort your life out and build me a shrine
you're on the decline,I'm here to refine
this rap shits mine you best go resign
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Posted: 2008-01-27 23:42:45
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Ohhh my god nocky,
You rhyme like a girl, but thats OK
with a username like nocky....watch out im Rocky!
ill give you a left, ill give you a right,
ive got rhymes to cuss you all night!
youll go down in less than 5 rounds,
but what do they say???
nocky your the clown!
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[ This Message was edited by: mosdelln on 2008-01-28 10:28 ]
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Posted: 2008-01-28 06:40:54
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