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nickorooster Posts: > 500

Hey, I just came across some poems I wrote a while ago, and am still looking for my best one... I might be able to remember a bit... I'll look into it. Well, here's my efforts last year:

Star

Ancient Astronomer=> Fireflies stuck on the distant sky.
Movie Producer => A good actor or celebrity.
Mathematician => Two simple triangles.
Astronomer => Celestial body of gas.
Technician=> Five component network.
Child => Mystical object, just out of reach.
Me => All of the above.

And:

Raid

In the sky, as I wake in the morn,
planes upon planes
are flying. It is
as though they are clouds
and their payloads, the rain
falls from their bellies,
whistling through the storm.
Suddenly the sky is alight
as if the brightest sun
had come out to see
the raindrops as they fell
into the calm earth; and paused
before disappearing in the light
of a million suns
another day, another raid.


Post yours, or comments on mine .

Nick
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Posted: 2005-01-26 21:47:54
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mince-inside Posts: 452

Anyone else remember Small Green Ball?
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Posted: 2005-01-26 22:05:08
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nickorooster Posts: > 500

Wow! Didn't see that when I searched poetry! That puts my non-phone related poems to shame!

Still looking for my good one....

Nick

Edit: The Below is Disgusting!!!!!!

[ This Message was edited by: nickorooster on 2005-01-26 22:20 ]
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Posted: 2005-01-26 22:14:57
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methylated_spirit Posts: > 500

Little Robin red-breast
Sitting on a pole
Niddle-noddle went his head
And poop went his hole.


Check out the limericks thread for some truly great poetry.
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Posted: 2005-01-26 23:18:00
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