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GOTCHA!!!
we have to be original, man!!!!
it's disapointing... a promising chap like u... !!!!
don't spoil the story like this... can't u re-arrange that bit? come ON!!!!
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Posted: 2003-04-14 20:38:00
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complain complain complain..... all you ever do is complain....
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Posted: 2003-04-15 02:55:00
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damn..you're good cyanx..
nice catch!
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Posted: 2003-04-15 02:57:00
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No offense cyanx, but even if you watched mars attack a gazillion times, no way you can write it better than Scythe
you're on my side remember hombre!
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Posted: 2003-04-15 03:00:00
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the constant buzz of mozzies irritates eric and he grudgingly awakes from his slumber.....it's still quite dark and he has every intention of drawing blood from the blood suckers that haf awaken him....he scans his surroundings and lo and behold...the humming buzz is not caused by mozzies......yikes!!!! he looks away in disgust.....the buzz's created from the air trapped in the concoction of bodily fluids and cum dripping outta his *happy* mates' arses......now that's one sight eric aint never gonna forget....he's heard bout cronic snoring but this takes the cake......the guy's snorin outta his ass and the buzz's loud enuf to wake a heard of elephants........it's getting brighter by the minute and his tummy suddenly reminds him that it's brekkie time.....wat better way to start the day than with a hearty brekkie....eric smiles....it's gonna be american brekkie for him this morning.....startin with the available sausages.......
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Posted: 2003-04-15 03:37:00
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HEY! I said it inspired me to write my bit and it's just the voice doing the hay-wire bit that could be construed as unoriginal. At least I make up my own characters, and the plot and all. Geez man! Loosen up! I didn't have green aliens with big heads on my ship. Twas the least I could do to make the aliens go out of the scene, as if that's not harde enough.
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Posted: 2003-04-15 05:32:00
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*francine in a dominatrux liquid latex outfit*
CYANX! apologize!
*francine back to her goody ol' self*
hey what happened here? ouch, bad headache
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Posted: 2003-04-15 05:48:00
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talk about splits
go change back to that dominatrix bit francine! Quick!
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Posted: 2003-04-15 05:53:00
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hahaha! it's not yet full moon!
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Posted: 2003-04-15 07:14:00
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ooo... francine! my preschool teacher gone bad... i like...
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Posted: 2003-04-15 07:34:00
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